Descriptive sentences wanted!! Elaboration needed.
by Ms. B. on Apr.03, 2010, under Blogging
Your assignment is to create meaty sentences with elements that we can see, hear, taste, feel and smell. Take the following sentence and elaborate it with some details. Don’t forget to add the Who? What? When? Where? and Why? to the sentence to make it exciting. Use descriptive words to help you. Click here if you need some more words.
The girl ran.
For example you might add a comment with:
The excited, teenaged girl quickly ran to the crowded bus stop to go to school because her car wouldn’t start and she was late.
Post your sentence in the comment box.
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